Difference between revisions of "The Chicago Incident"

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−	The giant man’s footsteps echoed in the quiet warehouse~~. It was almost as dark as a cave~~. The only source of light was the faint glow of the moon bleeding through two dingy skylights, just enough light to cast shadows.	+	The giant man’s footsteps echoed in the quiet, dimly lit warehouse. The only source of light was the faint glow of the moon bleeding through two dingy skylights, just enough light to cast shadows.

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